Katherine I. Highton

[Katherine I. Highton]

Aug 27, 2011 10:29:17 GMT Alora said:

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[style=background-color: #787878; opacity: 0.6; border: 0px; width: 415px; height: 150px; overflow: auto; color: #ffffff; padding: 10px; text-align: justify;]The Character Name: Katherine I. Highton Age: 16 Gender: Female Occupation: Breeder OOC: CBox Alias: believeinfeaire RP Sample: The Academy grounds where one of of Aramina's favorite places to study, mainly when it is really windy outside for the obvious reasons. Considering the weather at the moment the only reason she was walking around at the moment was the fact that she was actually able to get out once in awhile. As soon as she walked around the gardens a couple times over Aramina finally decided to sit down under a tree that looked like it was bursting with life. Finally feeling the glass under her fingertips as she sat down she began to wonder what was going to happen today. She was, for once, under the impression that something happened each that could change your life. Like yesterday when she only just passed that pop quiz that her class was given because she was up all the night before playing MMOPRG's. She had to admit though, it was a really good raid but whatever. Sitting down and taking a nice deep breath of fresh air Aramina began to wonder. What was actually going to happen what she lift this school. What challenges what she have to face when she enter the world as a power woman or whatever. That was the one thing she was worried about. Thinking about this just made it harder to relax in the peaceful surroundings. Lying down on the soft grass was like something had washed over her and it was like something was different. Maybe something new would happen today. As she laughed as she placed her head on the grass and stopped thinking, her mind wiped clean for the thing she was thinking and she just looked up to the sky and smiled. Notes: [/style]

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[style=background-color: #787878; opacity: 0.6; border: 0px; width: 415px; height: 150px; overflow: auto; color: #FFFFFF; padding: 10px; text-align: justify;] Katherine is 158cm tall and weights around 60 kgs. She had short chocolatey brown hair what curls inward around her shoulders with a few stripes of black in there. Her skin a lighter shade then most but at times can seem a little tan while out side. Her eyes are a nice shade of brown eyes that match her hair that look like a nice shade of hazel in certain types of light. [/style]

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[ThatRandomGuy]

Good start, but needs just a little more polishing before it's ready to go. First and foremost, please expand a bit on her personality - it's rather bland and vague, and we like to see well thought out detail here.

Second of all, I'm going to ask you to either lower her pokemon's levels down to between 15 to 20ish. She's only 16, and the average trainer's pokemon are usually around those levels. I may be convinced to either allow higher levels or to even allow them to stay as they are if you can provide a reasonably long, detailed history as to how they got so strong, where she got the individual pokemon, and what she accomplished (within reason) with them. As she is, nothing stands out to convince me that she's anything more than the common trainer she appears to be.

Furthermore, you have a number of moves that we cannot allow her pokemon to have at their current levels, either because they cannot be learned by those levels or because they are rather rare and powerful TM moves, which are meant to be rewards or otherwise purchased. Please rework Blaziken's moveset - he cannot start with Poison Jab, Sky Uppercut or Flamethrower, and remove Lucario's Aura Sphere and Rock Smash, and Golett's Psychic and Gyro Ball (depending on how well you write her history we'll possibly need to overlook the movesets again as per level changes).

Once those are fixed, post a reply here and I'll take another look.

[Katherine I. Highton]

How is that? I hope that the move set and levels are alright now and the same with the personality. If you need me to expand then just say. Hope that I have fixed everything. :)

[ThatRandomGuy]

Move sets look good, but the Blaziken needs to be changed into a Combusken or a Torchic now since it's below level 36. Other than that, pokemon are ready to go.

As for her personality, still a number of small issues and gramatical errors. I'll overlook the grammar, but the contradictions should be fixed - either she is lazy or she isn't. The fact that she's willing to put considerable work into something if she thinks it's "worth it" while being lazy is a paradox - most people don't work for things unless they believe the outcome is worth the effort put in, and while it isn't an outright contradiction to always being there when needed, it still doesn't quite fit. Once these issues are fixed the character should be ready to go.

[Katherine I. Highton]

I am crossing my fingers that the personality is alright this time. I am sorry about it being confusing the last time, I have been a little ill as of late and my head and my head has been all over the place.

[SarahSyna]

Approved.